Writing B1: A Complaint Email About an Online Order
Shopping & money
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B1 | Writing | 15 min
Writing Task: A Complaint Email
You ordered a pair of wireless headphones from an online shop called Tavrin Audio. There are two problems. Write a formal email of 100-130 words to Customer Service.
- Order number: 48213
- Ordered on: 3 March
- Problem 1: the headphones arrived five days late
- Problem 2: the left earphone does not work, even after two hours of charging
- You want: a new pair or your money back
You ordered a wireless headset from the online shop Tavrin Audio and had two problems. Write a formal email (100-130 words) to customer service. Use the information above correctly.
Check your email
- ☐ I write 100-130 words, including the subject line, the greeting and my name.
- ☐ I start with a short subject line and "Dear Sir or Madam,".
- ☐ I say why I am writing and give the order details.
- ☐ I explain both problems clearly.
- ☐ I say what I want and ask for a reply by a date or time.
- ☐ I finish politely and end with "Yours faithfully," and my name.
Hint: use a polite tone; do not use short forms or very informal sentences.
Your Email to Tavrin Audio
Write your email in the box (100-130 words).
Write your email in the box below (100-130 words), counting the subject line, the greeting and your name.
____ (Subject: ...)This is an open answer. The sample answer shows only one way to answer; you can choose a different solution and a different deadline.
Model answer and useful phrases
Example email
Subject: Faulty headphones – order 48213
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the wireless headphones I ordered from your website on 3 March. My order number is 48213.
There are two problems. First, the headphones arrived five days late, so I had to wait a long time to use them. Second, the left earphone does not work at all, although I charged the headphones for two hours.
I would like you to send me a new pair as soon as possible. If you cannot do that, please give me a full refund. I would be grateful if you could reply within one week.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Nguyen Thu Ha
| Phrase | Meaning | Example in another situation |
|---|---|---|
| I am writing to complain about | says why you are writing | I am writing to complain about the noise in the building. |
| arrived five days late | came five days after the promised date | The parcel arrived two days late. |
| does not work at all | does not work in any way | The air conditioner does not work at all. |
| I would like you to send me | asks them to send you something | I would like you to send me a new invoice. |
| a full refund | get all your money back | The shop gave me a full refund for the broken lamp. |
| I would be grateful if you could | asks politely for help | I would be grateful if you could check my booking. |
| I look forward to hearing from you | says you hope for a reply soon | I look forward to hearing from you about the job. |
| Yours faithfully | A formal way to end the email (use it when the email starts with "Dear Sir or Madam") | Dear Sir or Madam, ... Yours faithfully, Linh Tran |
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